About Pelwrath

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Name:
Jeffrey Yorio
Sex:
Male
Age:
59
Sign:
Virgo
Relationship Status:
Married
Orientation:
Straight
location:
Spenceport, New York, United States
Local Time:
17 May 2019 03:03

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Posted: 08 May 2019 10:43

The longer a story is the fewer views it generally receives. Not to say I and others don’t read 9k+ stories, members do. There seems to be a drop in views the more chapters you have. It’s a tough balancing act. I look at a max of 3-4k words, a personal choice as I’m looking for feedback on my story.

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Posted: 03 May 2019 10:04

Was there just a winner, congrats to Browncoffee for that great story, or were there finalists, honorable mention stories?

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Posted: 02 May 2019 10:52



It's not easy putting stories out there that people seem to really enjoy - which is one reason it's so gratifying when readers vote and comment to let you know if they liked it, or what did or didn't work.

Good luck - and even though you've worked hard and put a lot of thought and effort in, try not to take it personally if you get a bad vote or critical review. No writer (or story) is going to appeal to everyone. <img src="/images/emoticons/my2cents.gif" alt="My 2 cents">


Stormdog,

Thanks for you comment. A bad vote won't bother me, I hope there's an explanatory comment. I can only control my writing. It's taken a bit for me to grasp(?) the relationship between views, votes, and comments. I was pleasantly stunned when I saw my average score for the Notorious competition. I never expected to receive such a good score and the comments also were supportive and very complimentary. If a reader doesn't want to leave one of my stories a bad comment or vote, I'm fine with a PM explaining what the did and or didn't like. It's the only way I'll improve.
For me erotica is using sex/romance to help advance the story line, develop the characters, and give the readers an enjoyable story. I think(hope) I've improved from the stories I first posted to the more recent.

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Posted: 02 May 2019 05:00

Thank you all for your input and suggestions. I've several stories up and I've tried to use these suggestions, hopefully with good effect. Improvement is a constant as a writer.

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Posted: 16 Apr 2019 16:07

Out of couriosity, how many of us have had stories and or books published? If so, in what genres?

I’ve been fortunate to have 1sci-fi short story and 3 flash stories published. Have a vampire book waiting for me to save enough for an edit and the draft of an erotic series that I’ve posted here.

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Posted: 11 Apr 2019 08:00

I'd read 3 or 4 before I decided to enter a story. About the same time Darkside suggested that I enter a story. I think I've read and commented on every story so far. Many have returned the favor and I've noticed that several of my other stories have had more views, votes and comments. I never new what the judging system was and I should've do my due diligence about that, so my bad. For me it's a respect thing. If a writer is willing to put their work out there, exposed to the winds and currents of others, that's a big thing. Then to write a full story in 1000 words is even tougher. I feel each participant deserves my vote and comment. A good writer is also a good reader.

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Posted: 11 Apr 2019 05:48

I've greatly enjoyed the stories in the competition so far, they're well written and pretty darn good. My question is that it seems weighted for those with large followings. Newer members don't seem to have the notariety to have the voters and comments. Now, I know my story isn't good enough for much but the experience has been a great learning one. Would it make sense to have all who enter comment/vote on all other entries?

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Posted: 10 Apr 2019 19:38

Thanks for posting this and, on another site, I’m participating in NaPWriMo.

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Posted: 09 Apr 2019 04:40

I tried as was suggested and all it shows is that I have 14 comments. There are 20 stories listed before mine and I've no idea any significance in that. I'd love to know how many votes i have, could that be related to membership status/level?

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Posted: 08 Apr 2019 16:38

Now that’s the first time I’ve seen a lady want to shot her pussy with lead, to get a vote.

That said, I’d like any who haven’t, which is a fair number, to comment and vote on my story. Theoretically if 85% of the members here voted for me, I might be able to win. Fortunately I’m only looking for comments that help me improve as a writer, failure only means I keep posting below average stories. My story is. Cover Your Bets. The pitch fork and burning torch meeting about my story, scheduled for 10pmEST, has been postponed to Tuesday night at the same time.

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Covering Your Bets

Meredith Daulton was working on her next book, by the pool. Charles approached with her brunch. “Good morning Ms. Daulton. Brunch is served. Your 10:45 is enjoying a brunch. His name and vitals are on the summary card. I’ll bring him out.” Meredith put her tablet down to review the information. Paul J. Caruso, 28, Masters of Science in Italian History, a social studies teacher, and a...

Added 04 Apr 2019 | Category Flash Erotica | Votes 29 | Avg Score 4.7 | Views 760 | 31 Comments

Looked But Didn't See

This vixen had such fun, I knew not, what I’d done. The loving that night was rigorous, as we laughed at your ignorance.   A fortnight thereafter, I had no reason for laughter. My episodic weekend of euphoria, now replaced by mourning nausea.   Treated to lunch, through sorrowful tears I begged, your nature I’d never truly pegged. My lecherous lips, forgiven, graced by your tongue,...

Added 12 May 2019 | Category Love Poems | Votes 3 | Avg Score 4.67 | Views 195 | 2 Comments

Your Lady's Dreams

  I laughed when you said I was café au lait. I’ll make sure you... stay up... late, You make my kitty cat purr, my Italian Monsieur. My brothers to you bragged about size and girth The smile on your face, one of mirth you talked about skill and having only a hammer all they could do was stammer. I fondle your gift, an Italian horn dreaming of another, both my lips to adorn. ...

Added 27 Mar 2019 | Category Erotic Poems | Votes 4 | Avg Score 4.5 | Views 260 | 2 Comments

My Lover's Touch

She’s a guardian angel who freed my conscience. What cursed thread bound you to my life? We meet at the bistro, to witness dawn’s light. My mind feels our hands caress over coffee shared. We stroll along the canal greeting friends and ghosts alike. My hands at my side our shadows' arms entwine. Your smile’s a baited trap your laugh like a prison. We discuss our life and the future. Why...

Added 21 Mar 2019 | Category Love Poems | Votes 2 | Avg Score 4 | Views 239 | 1 Comment

Between the covers

You penny dreadful thing, a five and dime dame. Whispering in my ear, you still love to wear my ring. Wise trollop queen, you still know how many licks to make your king's heart sing.  ...

Added 18 Mar 2019 | Category Love Poems | Votes 2 | Avg Score 4 | Views 215 | 1 Comment

The Flame of Vengeance is Red

The weeks before Vince went back to college were busy. It took three days and some encouragement, as Vince helped Abby register for classes. All of her previous credits were still current, so she only needed two semesters to get her degree. She was approved for tuition reimbursement, provided she got a 3.0 average. He met her for lunch twice a week, her inquisitive friends no longer a problem....

Added 15 Mar 2019 | Category Love Stories | Votes 1 | Avg Score 4 | Views 671

The Flame of Vengeance Is Red Part 2

Martin Martin had done everything that Tammy told him to do. He did admit that calling Abby a slut wasn’t very smart. He liked Abby more than most of the girls he dated. If she didn’t have any kids he might have considered actually dating her. He liked kids and hers were okay but single mothers were looking for a father more than a relationship. He agreed that he’d change, at least to...

Added 20 Mar 2019 | Category Love Stories | Votes 1 | Avg Score 4 | Views 430

The Flame of Vengence is Red part 3

The next morning, Abby got up with the alarm. She went downstairs and started a pot of coffee. Put some bagels and cream cheese out then went to make sure Vince was awake. When she went to nudge him, his arm snaked out and grabbed her, pulling her down on top of him. “Good morning, Abby,” he said as he kissed her. Abby returned the kiss with interest. “You were faking it.” “Yes, the smell...

Added 01 Apr 2019 | Category Novels | Votes 1 | Avg Score 4 | Views 428

How far would I go for Love

“What do you think of Hanna? I can tell she turns you on and you like her but how much?” That’s a very awkward question that became more difficult as Julie started caressing my cock as I was enjoying the sweet aroma and nectar of Hanna's pussy. I stopped long enough to ask, “Are you jealous?” “No reason to be.” “Julie, get up here so my face can give you what I’m getting from Jerry,”...

Added 11 Mar 2019 | Category Threesomes | Votes 11 | Avg Score 4.36 | Views 2,211 | 6 Comments

How Far Would I Go For Love 2

Chapter 2   JERRY-   “Just by talking with us about it, you’ll make us happy," Julie said as she walked over to me and took my hands in hers. “Tell us about the first time you saw the bruises on Hanna. I remember very well the look on your face. Please tell us not only what you saw but what you felt and thought. Look at us as you do. Can you do that?” “Yes.” I looked at both of them...

Added 25 Mar 2019 | Category Love Stories | Votes 5 | Avg Score 4.6 | Views 866 | 5 Comments

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